I haven’t written a poem since oh, probably 7th grade. I found one by a christian, the usual claiming anyone but him is fool and decided to set my hand at a response. Not perfect but it amuses me. (memes and cool images below)
The fool says within his heart,
No god but mine, a hard rampart
Their ignorance willful, no good they do,
One among many, not just a few.
A steeple and a lightning rod,
Shows that their imaginary god
Has nothing, not a single fact
To show that oh, indeed it acts.Â
Not one can claim a truthier truth
Since not one can show or sleuth
That their version of their cult is best,
That their laws are hidden within the breast.
Christians fail, their claims astray
Each one sure that one should pray
Only as they, a common claim
When not one prayer hits where they aim.
No justice found within their book
Just lies and ignorance I’ve long forsook
Morals ne’er given at all
And just the same, there was no fall.
Cultists feed on the oppressed,
Hate and ignorance only professed
They make excuses, one and all
Jesus fails? Let’s ask Paul!
Happily, fantasies fail
Never one in hellish jail.
Hope exists, we carry it
Their god does nothing, not one whit.












Love it!
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thanks. my former 7th grade english teacher would be rolling in her grave if she knew how I used her teaching.
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I’m stealing your stuff and reposting it on Quora. We need more atheist like you.
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no problem. if you think of it, let folks know where it came from. Thanks!
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